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Audition for :iconescapefromnevara:

Well, putting all OCT reasons aside, this was great practice! And what I believe to be my first attempt at a comic EVAR...

But oh gawd, it's lacking in so many ways D: one of my strongest enemies is consistency, proportions, and BACKGROUDSFFFFFFF!!!

I'm sad to say this was pretty rushed :[ not only did I change my mind on what character I wanted to enter, I also changed my mind on what my comic was going to be at the last second (oh yah, real smart). So I was hardly able to pull out my full repertoire of poses and detail and such.
Although drawing that inside of the mansion was way funner than drawing trees :P
Lol, I'm also ashamed of the fact that the only expression I seemed to use for Jessi is that same stupid confused look. FAAAIIILLLL

Here's to hoping I get in! I'd love to be able to practice my comics more XD

© Bethany Berg *86Caskin

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:iconeanur0:
I like it! Do you have the next one?

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FLICKR' IT!
:iconscrii:
This is really nice, especially as your first attempt at a comic! The story flowed well and the layout is nice - I especially love that second-last frame there. :)

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JC. <3
:icondragonbevers:
I must say I loved this little introducing. though I would of liked to how a part where I could actualy see tank transforming to his "shield" arm mode. Maybe you would use it once its accepted. I would really love to see further things from this guy. Don't give up.
:iconkezrek:
This is sooo cooool! 8D I want to see more! *flails*

It's exciting to see characters you've worked on finally interacting in a world. ^^
:icongweakles:
>_> *wants to make a comic really bad now*

lol. For a first attempt this is great. God you're so good...*jealoussssS*

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:icondark-dragoncat:
that was really neat 8D
i like the beasts and stoof xD

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The Cat of Dragons has arrived. Who's ready for a bit of fun? *grins*
"I give up. I see not point in living if I can't be beautiful." - Howl
:iconageroth:
Well, she was encountering some pretty confusing stuff there, so it's really only appropriate for her to look like that. On panel 6, I might suggest making those dust clouds at the feet of that shadow creature a little darker. Other than that, it's wonderfully done!

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Dearly beloved, we be gathered here today.. to nail yer gizzards to the mast, ya poxy cur!
:icontharalin:
I love the 9 (or 10 ?) planel where this black thing just stands there !
Though its your first comik, it really looks great.

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Everyone makes mistakes
:iconmaryseif:
<3 I love this! Tank is such a neat character =D

I hope you get in cuzz I'd love to see more of this pair.

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....and then there was soup.

[link] <-- Go. Now.

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